Monday, 27 June 2016

Rain by Carmen

This week we were making Poems we had a choice of 

making an animation for a poem or making our own poems. 

I chose to make my own poem.


  1. A very emotive poem Carmen, it gives me the feeling that you like rain and that you find it very soothing. Am I right?
    I wonder if we used more enjambment in the layout if it would change the way the reader reads the words to give them even more effect?
    Mrs Parker

  2. This is a very emotional poem Carms. It sounds like you have worldly experience beyond your years. Great job x
    Deb Adie a.k.a. Mum