tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-965754492577033400.post6781915815276811495..comments2023-02-28T05:46:37.516+13:00Comments on Parker On Air @ Stonefields School: Rain by CarmenStonefields Blog Adminhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12232561425437120594noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-965754492577033400.post-32939075895671552212016-06-29T16:47:52.079+12:002016-06-29T16:47:52.079+12:00This is a very emotional poem Carms. It sounds lik...This is a very emotional poem Carms. It sounds like you have worldly experience beyond your years. Great job x<br />Deb Adie a.k.a. MumAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-965754492577033400.post-66159939362055456362016-06-27T16:47:25.269+12:002016-06-27T16:47:25.269+12:00A very emotive poem Carmen, it gives me the feelin...A very emotive poem Carmen, it gives me the feeling that you like rain and that you find it very soothing. Am I right? <br />I wonder if we used more enjambment in the layout if it would change the way the reader reads the words to give them even more effect? <br />Mrs Parker Stefani Parkerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09855090997757130231noreply@blogger.com