Pativai's Dear Diary

This is my dear diary writing about a man and his dog Sessor how they go to war.   

I was packing ready for war in flander’s field right away from friends and family. I brang along my awesome fluffy guard dog with me Sessor , we marched along in the big celebration in our represented soldier uniform having the hardest time of my life. Sessor and I jumped in the big green army van. We got in the camouflaged ark still wondering what would it be like after the war. Plot plot plot splashing the water in the air having to carry our heavy bags. Crash as the enemies shot away, splash splash men floating on water the lost of our men. The fog the dark clouds got us time to get to the trenches.

Having to see the horrible deaths of those men we lost. “Come on guys let's get ready we lost not that, much. We were lucky out there” as the captain said in an sad slouchy voice. We got to the trenches it was dark freezing like an dark cold freezer. I had an rest with Sessor curling up on me. The fur warmed me up having the morale feeling in my heart. Men watching out for the enemies.

Crumble crumble the men walking around in the trenches, making sure there were nothing suspicious in the trenches. Early in the morning it was dark with the rain splashing through the wet squishy ground. BOOM as the cannon went from the enemies it was like an firework show except this, firework can have people’s live end. We started to get guns ready boom boom the gun went flop as men went down we took them in an pile and started to shoot. Sessor stayed safe were all the other mascots were. (After the war) men lying in an pile the men who risked their lives for the country.

It was a tragedy having to see even mascots lying down resting their heads. Some men had to go to the nurses to heal them, so they wouldn't end their lives too some men laid their heads downs as the nurses could not do anything else. Sessor got released and he was still alive except he was limping he had an plaster around his leg I was still happy to see Sessor again. Sessor and I went in the ark and went home, Sessor was excited he was barking with joy all the men that survived were happy and went home to family and friends.

Sessor and I got home and all the family and friends were happy to see them, they jumped and celebrated having cake and an big feed for them to be still alive.

The end

Mayas Dear diary

WALHT: to use our senses to show rather than tell.

Learning Progression: Structure and Language. Use Visual features to engage the audience and convey meaning.

BK: Here is a picture called ‘Into the Jaws of Death.’ Taken by Robert F. Sargent June 6, 1944

Read this description of the image

MM: Complete a Y chart on a mini whiteboard first about what you would have seen, heard, and felt jumping out of the boat on the dawn of June 6 1944.

AU: Pretend you are one of these soldiers and write a diary account of the day you went to war.

You will attend a workshop on Monday to help you with this task.

Dear Diary

I jumped into the water  I could feel the water getting colder and colder every minute.I felt my heart going faster and faster as I begin to feel frightened.Then out of nowhere boom boom my fellow soldier was sinking into the deep blue ocean he had been shot.I could feel tears falling down my cheeks and i knew i had to be very quiet as we were getting closer then boom before I knew it we were at war i was shooting so much that my hand started to feel numb.I slowly started to walk back up onto land and hit one of the soldiers dead.I got shot back the pain was like a shark crunching the boat to pieces.Then I ran into the ocean as fast as a cheetah would run away from its enemy and went down into the water to retrieve my friend and he slowly woke up he was alive and when I knew it I was dead boom boom.   

Carmen's war hero's (Poster)

On April the 7th we started to make a world war mascots poster at first I found some images in the book then found info on the animal put it in my own words and eventually made this poster. :-)

Mayas war heros

Pativai's Animals's at war - Mascots

This is my animal's at war poster. The part I love about this poster is that the information that, can give the reader a bit of information about that specie. I put in there name and a little description, of them in the box for the information for the animal's. There were heap's of different kinds of animal's that went to world war one, there were horses dogs and even donkey's.