Mays next chapter

My reading activity was to write another chapter to the book The Butterfly Effect by Stephanie Mateku. Here is my chapter.

Soon After Emily and Henry used fly spray on the cocoon it started to crumble and then crack then all of a sudden boom boom it burst open.and up into the air went a beautiful butterfly with black and blue wings a black body and a beautiful face with long black hair and she said to Henry and Emily come on let's go and have some fun and you can call me Marry I had to get old to try this experiment so i waited and waited wanting to tell you that I was only grumpy because I had to wait so long to finally look beautiful again so I am so sorry that I was so mean to you here is some gifts to make up for what I did to you.”Oh thank you so much mrs anderson i forgive you”Said emily and henry said “thank you mrs anderson for your Kindness.  

The butterfly Effect By Charlie

This is my finished chapter of the book The Butterfly Effect.For writing we had to add a chapter to this book because we all though it did not really have an ending. Hope You Enjoy

As the cocoon slowly opened Emily and Henry Both held up there fly spray even higher and They waited and waited and ten seconds after The cocoon cracked open dramatically with a burst of light. Unsurprisingly to Emily and Henry Mrs Anderson was still not very pretty she had improved a little but it was not very noticeable apart from the fact the she now had black and white wings with a whitish gray dress.”Now” Shouted Henry sharply, Emily and Henry both sprayed there fly spray as much as they could till mrs anderson dropped faintly. “Yes”said to herself quietly. “Why?” asked Mrs Anderson weakly “ Why Me? Why Now?”   “Wha  what do you m mean”  Stammered Henry In a confused voice. But Mrs Anderson just stared back politely then she finally said I'm so sorry I was mean I just just ah It was Part of My my my…. Mrs anderson trailed off,  not finishing her sentence. Henry and Emily both knelt down to help mrs anderson up and then helped her sit up right on the chair, and gave her a glass of water.After that she felt much better and explained the whole story to them, Apparently Mrs Anderson had to be mean to them and have a big amount of food to become a butterfly and that she was actually really nice.

The End

Pativai's Butterfly Effect

This is my little paragragh of what will happen next in the buttefly effect. This is what I thought could be happening next and this is what I think should happen next.

Emily and Henry sprayed the cocoon as the cocoon started to slowly open. It slightly cracked open then it opened fully, there was an beam of light coming out of the cocoon. Mrs Anderson dropped on the floor with her eyes closed like a sleepy sloth. Emily and Henry rolled her over to see if she was alright, then they could see sparkles coming from behind her. Emily and Henry saw something pop up it was wing a beautiful, silk wing with the colours of purple, blue black and pink. Meanwhile Mrs Anderson started to float in the air having a beam of light shining on her then there were sparkles going around her and you could see her starting to change. When the beam of light went Mrs Anderson floated calmly back onto the ground and Emily and Henry both were shocked. Mrs Anderson said “ Hello kids thank you for releasing me out of that cocoon. You both shall have the gift of whatever you want please choose wisely there is only one wish” as she said in a very polite voice. Emily was shocked in excitement and then she closed and eyes and then wished for an happy family. Henry wanted to wish that he could be rich, then he wished that his whole family would have an awesome house and car then his wish came true. Mrs Anderson started to float slowly through the air like an beautiful angel. Then Henry and Emily started to fly Mrs Anderson was the most kindest person that Emily and Henry has ever met. Two days later they heard the car quickly coming through the driveway. Emily and Henry’s wings disappeared as they quickly ran to their parents and their parents opened their arms and hugged Emily and Henry. Then Mrs Anderson walked calmly down the stairs going through the pathway Emily and Henry’s Parents thanked Mrs Anderson and then Mrs Anderson quickly walked home and when she got into the house it turned plain white and the trees slowly bloomed with lovely flowers, and green fresh grass it was like an beautiful angel was lliving there and Emily thought maybe Mrs Anderson is a angel.

Carmen's The butterfly effect

This week the Pukekos have been reading a book called the butterfly effect we had to describe the character. We also had to write the next chapter of the book.

After spraying the cocoon with two cans of fly spray the horrible pale creature dropped out.

It still looked like Mrs Anderson but as a ugly pale bug. I softly yelled “Mrs Anderson is that you?”

No answer.

After a few hours Emily called the pest control. They were late but… Mrs Anderbutterfly thing had escaped out the window but the pest control was trying to track her down.

Finally after a few days pest control found Mrs Anderbutterfly. She had changed Henry yelled quietly “ Mrs Anderson hello??” she replied “GET OUT OF MY FACE KID.” “That was really mean” Emily whispered Mrs anderson truly had changed from strict to really really mean. “Mum had got informed about this! Eventually Mrs Anderbutterfly was set free out into the wild