The butterfly effect

Pativai's Butterfly Effect

This is my little paragragh of what will happen next in the buttefly effect. This is what I thought could be happening next and this is what I think should happen next.

Emily and Henry sprayed the cocoon as the cocoon started to slowly open. It slightly cracked open then it opened fully, there was an beam of light coming out of the cocoon. Mrs Anderson dropped on the floor with her eyes closed like a sleepy sloth. Emily and Henry rolled her over to see if she was alright, then they could see sparkles coming from behind her. Emily and Henry saw something pop up it was wing a beautiful, silk wing with the colours of purple, blue black and pink. Meanwhile Mrs Anderson started to float in the air having a beam of light shining on her then there were sparkles going around her and you could see her starting to change. When the beam of light went Mrs Anderson floated calmly back onto the ground and Emily and Henry both were shocked. Mrs Anderson said “ Hello kids thank you for releasing me out of that cocoon. You both shall have the gift of whatever you want please choose wisely there is only one wish” as she said in a very polite voice. Emily was shocked in excitement and then she closed and eyes and then wished for an happy family. Henry wanted to wish that he could be rich, then he wished that his whole family would have an awesome house and car then his wish came true. Mrs Anderson started to float slowly through the air like an beautiful angel. Then Henry and Emily started to fly Mrs Anderson was the most kindest person that Emily and Henry has ever met. Two days later they heard the car quickly coming through the driveway. Emily and Henry’s wings disappeared as they quickly ran to their parents and their parents opened their arms and hugged Emily and Henry. Then Mrs Anderson walked calmly down the stairs going through the pathway Emily and Henry’s Parents thanked Mrs Anderson and then Mrs Anderson quickly walked home and when she got into the house it turned plain white and the trees slowly bloomed with lovely flowers, and green fresh grass it was like an beautiful angel was lliving there and Emily thought maybe Mrs Anderson is a angel.

The Butterfly Effect by Ashleigh

Use this organiser for narrative texts that you read.

What are the FACTS?

What did the character SAY?

What did they DO?

What might the character have been THINKING?Infer about the character - make judgements on the character’s personality

When Mrs Anderson became a butterfly, she was an ugly butterfly, she had black wings and gray body. “Mrs Anderson” Emily said it worriedly. Mrs Anderson turned off light and was flying around the house she didn’t want anybody to see her ugly wings. “Do not turn the light on” Mrs Anderson said softly. Suddenly Emily and Henry heard the strange sound “Is it a ghost?” Henry screamed, Emily turned the light on and they saw Mrs Anderson had  black wings and gray body, “What are you doing Mrs Anderson?” they asked curiously. Mrs Anderson was very angry and they also can see the smoke blowing out of her ears. Mrs Anderson quickly turned the light off again, and Mrs Anderson got out of the window and got back to her own spooky house.

Curies The Butterfly Effect

This time The Pukeko group has been reading a book called The Butterfly effect and we did some tasks about the book. While we read this book we learnt about adverbs and what they are. Adverbs are and descrptive verb that ends with an "ly".
This is my character inference chart about Mrs Anderson a lady in the story:

On Thursday we had to wright the ending of the story in our own way.:

They didn’t mind waiting at all…

Suddenly Emily and Henry heard a zip sound that whooshed theirs minds of waiting they raised the hands nervously to the mysterious cocoon they had sweat all over their faces they could not wait to get rid of this cruel women.

During that most exciting moment Henry had noticed that the toad Mrs Anderson owned was licking a piece of paper on a wrecked book Emily cautiously stepped forward while Henry held his can of fly spray, Gently Emily flipped over the pages and read them quietly until she stopped and she stood there and froze in shock she dropped her can of fly spray and shut her eyes and the last movement was turning around.

At last she tip toed to Henry and whispered to him everything she had read but Henry was confused so he accidentally blurted out “Butterfly?” but after he said that they both heard a loud zip and then they quickly raised the can of fly spray ready to spray it on Mrs Anderson but suddenly the toad started croaking and they accidentally thought it was Mrs Anderson so they sprayed it on the cocoon instead.

Suddenly it became all foggy in the room and Henry covered his face with his hands so he wouldn’t breathe the gas meanwhile he had realised that Emily had disappeared he called out her name softly until she saw her under the bed, Emily had quickly crawled out of the bed.

Until she saw Mrs Anderson’s head popping out so Emily screamed as Mrs anderson bursted out of the cocoon and she was no longer an old lady she was half butterfly and half human but she had her eyebrow down which meant she was angry and surely she was because she shouted at the kids “How dare you two little brutes sneak in my personal private area you little eggs come here right now!” She shouted across the room as she was flying she was starting to destroy the house Emily screamed to Henry “Henry quickly run and grab our precious stuff hurry” SHe said in a mad rush.

By the time they reached outside the house was broken down they saw Mrs Anderson on the ground with broken wings and messy hair they realised she was gone forever they danced around happy but then their parents car was coming back they got scared so they quickly superglued their desks and found their maths books and found a pen and pencil each so they sat pretending that they didn’t see anything but no luck their parents saw poor Mrs Anderson and said to their kids “You two are grounded until you die” They both said grumpily.

The End  

By Curie