Monday, 27 June 2016

Rain by Ashleigh

We need to learn our language features so we were writing a poem.


  1. Hi Ashleigh, I've noticed that you did not include the author of the poem, this is very important as it was not your own writing. Please add it to the first slide of the presentation. I like the images you have selected. Particularly the one on slide 8 with the hand out and the rain washing over it.
    Mrs Parker

  2. Hi Ashleigh I like the Animation you made I mostly enjoy how you have made the pictures match the words. I think that next time you could be more creative and make the words or some of the pictures disappear