We learned how to use Fanboys, AAAWWUBBIS, ZIG ZAG and Complex interrupter.
Shanya:
FANBOYS: I was not sleeping yet, even if my mum told me to.
Complex Interrupter: The big mountain, very slippery and rocky, was hard to climb.
ZIGZAG: I was willing to search for the diamonds. Diamonds are very expensive.
AAAWWUBBIS: Although I was scared of the cave I went into it to search for diamonds.
Ashleigh:
ZIG ZAG: When the storm has stop we are allowed to do something outside. Outside we did some paint.
AAAWWUBBIS: After we finished our homework, we will be allowed to do something fun!
Complex interrupter: After the the paint dries we need to glue some stuff on, like sparkle star and glitter, for decoration.
FANBOYS: I haven’t finished my work, so I need to do it in my own time.
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ReplyDeleteSome fantastic examples Ashleigh and Shanya. You've used some creative ideas and are becoming more confident with the sentence structures, vocabulary and punctuation.
ReplyDeleteI see you've missed the comma on your AAAWWUBBIS example though Shanya, and Ashleigh some of our tense isn't consistent.
Ashleigh and Shanya great to see you going beyond the set texts and coming up with some ideas of your own. It makes your writing so much interesting when you really think of such colourful descriptions.
ReplyDeleteAshleigh and Shanya great to see you going beyond the set texts and coming up with some ideas of your own. It makes your writing so much interesting when you really think of such colourful descriptions.
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