Hi Charlie, Well done on getting this poem on the blog, I know that you really struggled with this poem at the beginning, and it was very challenging to think about every day objects using metaphors! But, you have been successful!! I like your metaphor - 'when you open him he is a trampoline'. It sometimes feels like that when the spring open to refill! Well done, and keep being determined!
Hi Charlie, Well done on getting this poem on the blog, I know that you really struggled with this poem at the beginning, and it was very challenging to think about every day objects using metaphors! But, you have been successful!! I like your metaphor - 'when you open him he is a trampoline'. It sometimes feels like that when the spring open to refill! Well done, and keep being determined!
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