This my poem about the field, the poem is trying to show you what kind of things are in my perspective of the field. I used some personification and metaphors to make it hard for people to guess what I was writing about. It was hard to come up with some metaphors but Mrs Parker helped me, and then she explained what that can be simmilar to.
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Thursday, 7 July 2016
Pativai's Field Poem
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Friday, 25 March 2016
Pativai's Stonefield School Flag
My flag represents the school values we use in Stonefields school. I have a explanation on what the flag represents on each different part. I had this idea come to me because we always use it in learning and play time also in sports. What I think I did very well on this flag is the things I used to represent Stonefields. I think I could of had done a better job on having it, look more clearer and have a bit more explanation on the flag. The most hardest thing I had to do was try and figure out an design on, how to put this flag in a nice flag kind of look.
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Tuesday, 22 March 2016
Pativai's Letter to John Key
(Pativai)
81 Tihi St
Stonefields School
AUCKLAND
John Key
Prime Minister
Parliament Building
Wellington
New Zealand
6160
17 March 2016
Dear John Key,
My name is Pativai I am an year 6 and I go to Stonefields School.
I strongly believe we should change the flag because of the three reasons I am going to be explaining.
Firstly, I think we should change the flag because it is an original flag of new zealand and no other flag has other colours of designs like us. We should change our flag because of the fern in our flag there is no other flag that has an fern on it. We need an new flag because of our old flag it was simple and when we have our new flag we have a bright colourful New Zealand flag.
Secondly, I think we should change the flag because of all the culture from new zealand has been put into this flag. I think we should change the flag because of the fern and the colours in the flag for example blue is representing the south pacific. I think the flag should be changed because of it mostly representing new zealand, for an example the fern represents the sport in new zealand.
Thirdly, I think we should change the flag because it would be really nice to have an sports sign on our flag now it can represent the fitness and the gold silver and bronze that the spots team has been winning. The flag can represent our old flag too because the blue can maybe in some way represent.
I really think that we should change the flag because of the three reasons that I explained to you.
Yours Sincerely
Pativai
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Charlie's Flag Design
This is my flag design for Stonefields school. Maya and I worked together on the hill with the rocks and the people from the learning process. I came up with the Trees and the butterflies by myself.
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Monday, 21 March 2016
Stonefields flag by Ashleigh
Design a flag that would be suitable to fly for Stonefields School.
You will need to bring what you know about the school, consider what colors, symbols and important values need to be represented on your design.
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Friday, 18 March 2016
My flag design by Shanya
Today we had to design a flag for our School. first we had to ask our parents about what they think about changing the flag, then we had to annotate someone else's flag that they made. After we had to make a flag for our school. I think I did well at designing the mountain and the rocks, but I found it quite difficult to do the left side of the mountain.
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