tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-965754492577033400.post8088752536536943646..comments2023-02-28T05:46:37.516+13:00Comments on Parker On Air @ Stonefields School: Carmen's The butterfly effect Stonefields Blog Adminhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12232561425437120594noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-965754492577033400.post-84107557290148200342016-06-21T11:29:41.465+12:002016-06-21T11:29:41.465+12:00Sure I will edit my post soon
Thanks for the feed ...Sure I will edit my post soon<br />Thanks for the feed forward Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-965754492577033400.post-46669598180426466612016-06-21T11:29:25.124+12:002016-06-21T11:29:25.124+12:00Sure I will edit my post soon
Thanks for the feed ...Sure I will edit my post soon<br />Thanks for the feed forward Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-965754492577033400.post-32205765059376612172016-06-20T13:53:33.085+12:002016-06-20T13:53:33.085+12:00Hey Carmen, You've used the adverb slowly to d...Hey Carmen, You've used the adverb slowly to describe how she yelled, do you think you could have added any more adverbs to your chapter? <br />Mrs Parker Stefani Parkerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09855090997757130231noreply@blogger.com