tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-965754492577033400.post6063980775723246252..comments2023-02-28T05:46:37.516+13:00Comments on Parker On Air @ Stonefields School: Pativai's How Mummies were made ? Explimation ExlamplarStonefields Blog Adminhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12232561425437120594noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-965754492577033400.post-71879052097685175602016-09-12T12:43:03.389+12:002016-09-12T12:43:03.389+12:00Once we got to the beach me and my cousins started...Once we got to the beach me and my cousins started to sprinted to the sand. The sand warm and soft went we jumped in.<br /><br />Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-965754492577033400.post-65145825915132262462016-09-07T12:15:55.658+12:002016-09-07T12:15:55.658+12:00Hey Pativai, you've done a great job with your...Hey Pativai, you've done a great job with your AAAWWUBBIS and Complex interrupter examples, however your zig zag and fanboys need work. <br />For the zig zag you could have written: Once we got to the beach me and my cousins started to sprint to the warm sand. The sand was warm and soft when we jumped in. <br /><br />The 'sand' is the end of and beginning of the next sentence. <br />As for your FANBOYS, it needs to have one of the words For, And, Nor, But, Or, Yet or So. Stefani Parkerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09855090997757130231noreply@blogger.com